Friday, September 29, 2023

Chapter 19: Brian Returns to the Forest

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Brian walked down the forest path.  
It felt good to be back in the forest.  Granted, he had just been in the forest a last week with Finn.  But when you lived your life in the mountains, it was always good to be back in the forest.  The lush green plants soothed his eyes.  There were plenty of colorful wildflowers all around the ground.  The green moss covered the rocks and the logs.  The air smelled sweet.
Last week, when Brian had been back in the forest with Finn, they had both taken care to hide their faces, and they had deliberately stayed off of the main paths.  Now, Brian was walking confidently down the main path with his face unveiled.  He didn’t care if anyone found him.  In fact, he wanted to be found.
And it wasn’t long before they found him.  Brian heard them long before they said anything.  He could hear them moving up in the trees, and he could hear them rustling through the bushes.  “Bumblers, all of them,” Brian thought to himself.  “They think they’re being sneaky, but they’re making enough noise to alert even a child.”
Brian kept walking, and didn’t turn his head.  But eventually, one of the men stepped out from the bushes and came into the path just slightly behind Brian.  “Alright, that’s far enough,” the voice called out from behind him.  “Stop walking, Brian.”
“I was wondering when you lads were going to come out from those bushes,” Brian said.  “I’ve been listening to you for the past mile.”
“You stupid clod,” the voice said.  “I thought you had enough sense not to come back to the forest.”
Brian started to turn around.  The tone of the voice changed rapidly.  “Don’t make any sudden moves now.  We’ve got you covered.”
Three more men emerged from behind the trees.  Two of them had bows tight, with the arrows aimed squarely at Brian.  Another had a sword drawn. 
Brian put his hands up, but he didn’t seem nervous.  “Easy, easy, lads,” he said.  “I’ve known you were there the whole time.  I’ve been waiting for you to come out of your hiding places.”
The men laughed.  “If you knew we were here, then why did you come this way?” asked one of them.  “You know that it’s death for you to be caught in this forest.”
“I’ve got some information for Risoart,” said Brian.  “Bring me to him.”
The men laughed again.  “Nice try.  Risoart’s not going to waste his time with you.”
“He will, once he hears what I’ve got to say,” Brian said.  “I’ve got information he will want to hear.  I’ve got some information that Ambrosia will want to hear.”
At the name of Ambrosia, the men stopped their laughing.  They looked at Brian with different eyes.  “What do you know?” one of them asked.
Brian chuckled.  “No luck, lads.  This information is too valuable to me.  It’s going to get me a full pardon, once Risoart hears it.  I’m not going to give it away to you, and then have you try to claim credit for it yourselves.”
“Well, then we’re at an impasse,” one of the men said.  “Because we’re not going to risk disturbing Risoart until we know for sure that your information is good.”
Another man spoke up.  “If we bring you to him, and you just start speaking nonsense, then we’ll take the blame.”
“He’s got a fierce temper, I’ll grant you that,” Brian said.  “If he doesn’t like what I have to say, he’ll probably cuss you out and smack your ears.  But he won’t do any more than that.  You can stand being cussed out again, can’t you?  You lads haven’t grown that weak while I’ve been away.  But on the other hand, if he’s happy with my information, then you’ll get the credit for bringing me to him.  And when Ambrosia hears about this, she’ll give the credit to you too.”
They hesitated.
“Come on,” Brian said.  “I wouldn’t have come all the way down from the mountains if the information wasn’t really good.”
The men looked at each other.  One of them said, “Well, he’s obviously come down to the forest of his own free will.  He could have just stayed up in the mountains.  He must have something.”
Another man gave an angry sigh.  “Alright, alright,” he said.  “Come with us, Brian. We’ll take you to Risoart.”

Tuesday, September 26, 2023

Chapter 18: Grinthal, King of the Goblins

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Still tied up with the ropes, they were dragged down the tunnels, and into the throne room of King Grinthal.
Alfred was still there finishing up his breakfast when they were brought in.  He jumped up from the table in surprise.  “Oh no!” he said.  “Did they get you guys too!”
“Ah, Alfred,” Shawn said wryly.  He was tied up, but he managed to wriggle around so that he could see Alfred.  “Don’t worry, we’re here to rescue you.”
“Are you okay, Alfred?” Catherine called out.
“I’m fine,” Alfred said.
“Silence!” King Grinthal called out.  “You will not speak unless I speak to you first.”
Grinthal then turned to his goblin soldiers.  “Who are they?” he asked.
“Intruders, your majesty,” said one of the goblin soldiers.  “We found them in the tunnels.”
“What?” Grinthal squeaked.  “Intruders? So they are not escaped slaves?  But they’re humans.  How did humans manage to get into our tunnels?”
“We found the entrance to your tunnels,” said Carlyle.  “We’ve come to get our friend.”
“I’ve already told you,” Grinthal exclaimed.  “You are to keep silent.”
Grinthal turned to the goblin soldiers.  “Well?” he demanded.  “How did they get in?”
The goblin soldiers squeaked excitedly, and all began talking at once.  “Quiet, quiet, one at a time,” Grinthal demanded.  A silence fell over the goblin soldiers, and in the silence, Grinthal thought he could hear something.  “What is that sound?” he demanded.  “Who is singing?  Is anyone humming?”
Carlyle spoke up quickly.  “I can tell you how we got here, your majesty, if you allow me to speak.”
Grinthal hopped up and down in fury.  “I’ve already told you not to speak,” he said.
“But do you give me permission to speak now?” Carlyle asked.
“You are not to speak unless I speak to you?” Grinthal demanded.
“But then, how would I ask permission to speak?” Carlyle asked again.
Grinthal’s face turned red with fury.  It actually turned red.  It was a brighter shade of red than Carlyle had ever seen on any human face, but goblin faces can sometimes be more expressive than humans.  “Bring me my whip!” Grinthal yelled.  “We shall teach these human children some manners.”
Several goblins scattered to find Grinthal’s whip.
“Now,” said Grinthal. “Who is humming?  That sound shall cease as well!”
While Carlyle had been distracting Grinthal, Catherine had been summoning the energy by softly humming.  Her hands were tied up behind her back, but she was slowly burning through the rope that held her hands together.  Once she had burned through the rope, she was able to free her hands.  Moving slowly to attract as little attention as possible, Catherine moved her hands out from behind her back, and then reached to her legs to burn through the ropes that held her legs.
The goblins didn’t notice.  They were too busy squawking about, and fetching whips for King Grinthal.
Finally a suitable whip was found for King Grinthal, and presented to him.  “Now,” Grinthal said menacingly to Carlyle, “I will teach you to be quiet.”
But just at that moment, Catherine was standing up.  She had freed herself from all of the ropes.  She strode over to King Grinthal.
King Grinthal was so surprised to see Catherine out of her ropes that for a couple of seconds he froze up and didn’t know what to do.  But then he lashed out with the only thing he had in hand--his whip.  Grinthal cracked the whip, and the lash shot out towards Catherine.
Catherine was still humming, and her hands were glowing.  She reached out and grabbed the lash and the electric power protected her hands.  A jolt of electricity traveled back along the whip and gave Grinthal a shock.  He yelped and dropped the whip.
Catherine still kept walking towards Grinthal, and Grinthal was now getting scared.  He backed away from her, and hid behind his throne.  “Don’t come near me,” he said.
At this point some of the other goblins ran forward to attack Catherine, but before they could get to her, she darted forward and grabbed Grinthal by the back of the neck.  Lifting Grinthal into the air, Catherine said to him, “tell the other goblins to stand back.”
The other goblins hesitated slightly, but then Grinthal yelled out, “What are you waiting for?  Get her!”
As the goblins rushed forward towards Catherine, she felt herself in danger, and energy flowed through her freely.  Now she didn’t even have to hum to try to summon it.  It just flowed out.  And poor Grinthal, who she was holding, got badly burned.
“Yeow!” he screamed out in pain.  “Stop it!  Stop it! Stop it!”  He then stopped forming recognizable words, and just squealed in pain.
“Tell the other goblins not to attack me,” Catherine demanded.
“Yes, yes!” Grinthal agreed.
“Tell them to untie my friends,” Catherine said.
“Yes, yes, anything,” Grinthal said.  “Anything, just please, stop it.  The pain!”
Because Catherine’s adrenaline was racing, she actually wasn’t able to stop the flow of energy.  The only way she could stop the flow of energy was to remove Grinthal from her touch.  Which she did by simply dropping him.
The other goblins stood momentarily stunned, not daring to move.  “You heard your king,” Carlyle shouted.  “Untie us!”
The goblins looked at Grinthal, who was picking himself up from the floor.  “Don’t just stand there!” Grinthal commanded.  “Kill her!”
Catherine immediately bent down to pick up Grinthal again.  But Grinthal evaded her hand, and ran out of reach.  He ran straight across the room, but he was so focused on running away from Catherine that he didn’t see Alfred.
Alfred had stood up from the breakfast table, and had picked up one of the chairs.  As Grinthal came running by, Alfred swung the wooden chair and hit Grinthal right in the face as Grinthal was trying to run by.  He knocked Grinthal over, and Grinthal lay flat on the floor, dazed.
Meanwhile, the other goblins attacked Catherine.  They came at her, thrusting with their knives and short swords.
Catherine was discovering that when the power was flowing through her body, the inside of her hands where the energy manifested itself seemed to be invulnerable.  If she could catch the point of their small swords on her palms, it did her no harm.  But when their swords nicked her legs, or anywhere else on her body, they drew blood.  Catherine tried to deflect the sword thrust with her hands as best she could, but she also was forced to slowly retreat.  There were too many goblins for her to block all at once.
As Catherine was forced to slowly back up, she found herself taking shelter behind Grinthal’s throne.  It was a heavy golden throne, but the energy seemed to give Catherine extra strength, and she found she could push the throne over.  The throne tumbled over, crushing some of the goblins beneath it and sending the rest fleeing.
In their terror, the goblins fled to the edges of the room.  Although once they realized that the throne was once again inert, and that Catherine now stood without protection, they slowly started to regroup.  
But as this was going on, Alfred rushed over to where Catherine was standing, carrying Grinthal’s body with him.
“Here,” Alfred said.  “Take him.”
Grinthal was still stunned from the blow that Alfred had given him with the chair, and was only now slowly moving his head and refocusing his eyes.  Catherine realized that if she grabbed Grinthal now, she would just send electricity shooting through his body, and she didn’t want to do that.  “I don’t want to touch him now,” said Catherine.  “I would just shock him. When I’m scared, I can’t turn off the energy.”
“Could you calm yourself down then?” Alfred asked.
Catherine looked at him with disgust.
“Sorry,” Alfred said.  “Um… what about just touching his feet a little then?”
Alfred held Grinthal, and Catherine reached out her hand and gingerly poked his foot with the tip of her index finger.  Grinthal’s eyes immediately opened, and he squealed with pain.  “What’s happening?” he said.  Then his eyes focused, and he saw Catherine standing before him.  “No! No! Nooo!” he yelled out.
“Untie my friends,” Catherine said.
“Untie them!” Grinthal shrieked the order to his goblin soldiers.  And then he started sobbing.
The goblins rushed forward to untie Carlyle, Shawn, Lucinda, Molly and Kevin.
Carlyle stood up, rubbing his wrists where the rope had rubbed against his skin.  “And give me back my father’s sword,” Carlyle demanded.
Catherine opened her mouth to repeat Carlyle’s demand, but before she could even say anything, Grinthal burst out, “Give them back their weapons.  Give them back all of their weapons.”
“Thank you,” said Catherine.
“What do you want?” Grinthal wailed.
“We want you to release our friend,” Catherine said, pointing to Alfred.
Grinthal twisted around to look at the boy who was holding him up.  “I order him released,” he said.
“Not just me,” said Alfred.  “Release all the children that you are holding prisoner in these tunnels.”
“All of them?” Grinthal said.  “Why do you want them all released?  You don’t know who they are.”
“We want them all released,” said Catherine.
“You ask too much,” Grinthal said, a note of defiance creeping back into his voice.
Catherine grabbed Grinthal’s leg, and the electricity flowed out through her again.  Grinthal shrieked and shrieked.  Catherine released his leg.  “We want them all released,” Catherine said.
“Fine,” sobbed Grinthal.  “I order them all released.”
“And one final thing,” said Catherine.  “You goblins are to leave these mountains.”
“What?” Grinthal was more surprised than anything else.  “But where will we go?”
“Anywhere you like.  You can go down to the forest.  But you must not stay in the mountains anymore.”
“But what kind of talk is this?” Grinthal was genuinely confused.  “The mountains have no laws.  That is why all the evil creatures make it their homes.  The ogres, the witches, the vampires, the goblins, we all live on the mountains.  Why would you tell us to leave the mountains, and go down to the forest?”
“Because the mountains are no longer a lawless place,” said Carlyle.  “The mountains are now a safe place for the mountain folk to live in peace.”
“And we are banishing all the evil creatures from the mountains,” said Catherine.
“But where will we go?” wailed Grinthal.
“Jack said that you have tunnels going all the way down the mountains and even under the forest lands,” said Alfred.  “You can go down to your tunnels under the forest, but you must never return to the mountains.”
“I have many friends among the mountain animals,” Catherine said to Grinthal.  “And the wolves are my friends.  The ravens are my friends.  And they will report to me if the goblins are ever seen on these mountains again.  And then, we will come back into these tunnels and find you.”
Grinthal looked back and forth from Carlyle to Catherine.  “Who are you?” he asked.  “The mountain folk have no kings or queens.  They have no rulers.”
“They do now,” Carlyle answered.

Sunday, September 17, 2023

Chapter 17: The Battle in the Tunnels

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Alfred looked at Jack.  “Why would we go to the goblins?  Shouldn’t we try to escape instead?
“Oh there’s no escape,” Jack said.  “Believe me, I’ve tried.  The goblins keep all the tunnels guarded.  We couldn’t get to one of the exits before they all swarmed all over us and dragged us back down to the caves.”
“I see,” said Alfred.
“We should get going now,” said Jack.  “We need to hurry back to the others.  The goblin king will be angry if we are late.”
“And what happens if he is angry?” asked Alfred.
“Lots of stomping and yelling,” answered Jack.  “Sometimes he throws things.  And then, they get out the whips.”
Jack brought Alfred down to meet Grinthal, the king of the goblins.  When they got to Grinthal’s throne room, Jack actually bowed.  Although Alfred stayed standing.  “Your majesty,” Jack said.  “I have brought my friend to you, as I have been ordered.”
“Excellent,” said King Grinthal.  “Now, get down to the mines at once.  You’re late.”
“Your majesty, he hasn’t eaten anything yet,” Jack said.
“That is his fault,” Grinthal replied.  “The rest of the children have had time to eat.”
“But he was only just now captured by your soldiers,” Alfred said.  “He couldn’t possibly have had time to eat anything.”
“Oh, very well,” Grinthal said.  “He may stay and eat.  You must go and start digging.”
Before he left, Jack grabbed Alfred quickly by the elbow.  “King Grinthal has a temper,” Jack said quickly.  “You mustn’t say anything that will contradict him.  Just eat your gruel as quickly as you can, and then come down and join us.”
King Grinthal indicated a wooden table where Alfred was directed to sit.  The table was empty now, but it had not yet been cleared, and there were lots of bowls still on the table.  Alfred sat down.  A scurrying goblin came and placed a fresh bowl of gruel on his table.
Alfred looked down at the gruel.  He didn’t feel particularly hungry at the moment.  He was too overwhelmed with trying to figure out what was happening.  Alfred looked up at the Grinthal.  “So, where am I exactly?” he asked.
Grinthal flew into a rage and started hopping up and down.  “Didn’t that boy Jack explain things to you?  He was supposed to tell you everything, so that I wouldn’t be bothered with your stupid questions.”
“Well, yes, he did tell me some things,” Alfred began.  “But I was wondering--”
Grinthal threw his golden scepter at Alfred’s head before he could finish.  Alfred ducked, and the scepter clattered against the wall.  “Then be quiet!” Grinthal roared.  “Speak only when you are spoken to.  Do not disturb the great king.”
Grinthal looked just like any other goblin, which is to say he was short.   Goblins are about 3 feet high.  They have short legs, and long spindly arms, and their whole bodies are covered with short brown hair.  And they have short tempers.  It’s very easy to upset them, and to get them hopping up and down in anger, just like Grinthal was doing now.
“Eat your gruel!” Grinthal commanded.  “You have a long day of digging in the mines, and you must build up your strength.”
“But why must I dig--” Alfred began, but he was cut off when Grinthal threw the orb at him.

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Catherine, Carlyle, Shawn, Kevin, Molly and Lucinda stood at the entrance to the goblin tunnels. 
“So what do we do now?” asked Molly.  “Do we go in?”
“We do,” said Catherine.   “We go in and see if we can find Alfred.”
“But there are goblins inside,” said Shawn.
“No one is forced to come inside,” Catherine said.  “You may come if you wish.  Otherwise, you may stay behind.”
They all looked at each other.  “I’ll come,” Shawn said in a decisive tone.  
“I’ll come,” Molly said.
“I’ll come,” said Lucinda and Kevin together.
We should probably have someone stay back to communicate with the other members of the group,” Carlyle said.  “Just in case anything goes wrong, we want them to know where we are.”
“I can help,” said Bettina the raven.  “I’ll fly down and let them know where you are.”
“That would be a great help to us,” said Catherine.  
Then, Carlyle, Catherine, Shawn, Lucinda, Molly and Kevin all entered into the cave.  
They were all armed.  Lately, they had started taking their weapons everywhere.  Shawn was carrying his father’s sword, Lucinda had her spear with her, Molly had her giant wooden staff, Kevin had his huge club, and of course, Carlyle carried Finn’s old sword.  
It was dark, at first.  (The moonstones which Alfred had seen were only located in the parts of the tunnels where the goblins allowed their child slaves to go.)  But Catherine produced the light for them by humming.  Her hands glowed with the electricity.
As they walked down the tunnel, it wasn’t long before they encountered their first goblin.  At first, it was just one lone goblin, and he was very surprised to see them.  In fact, when he first saw them, he immediately let out a high pitched little scream, and then ran away.
The goblin was evidently more scared of them than they were of him.  But still, there was something about that little scream which shocked and unnerved them.  They were all silent for a bit after the goblin had cried out.  Shawn let out a nervous little chuckle, and tried to break the tension with a laugh.  “I didn’t know that’s what they sounded like,” he said.
“If they all run away like that, then we shouldn’t have much to worry about,” said Molly.
“Unless he’s going to sound the alarm, and come back with his friends,” said Lucinda.
“I was just thinking the same thing,” said Carlyle.  “Keep your weapons ready just in case.”
Catherine didn’t say anything.  She just kept humming.
They walked through the tunnel a little bit more.  The path sloped steadily downward, and they walked with Catherine’s light leading the way.
But then, there was some light in the tunnel up ahead.  This was the moonstones that Jack and Alfred had seen earlier.  It was the start of a larger open tunnel.
They walked into the larger more open tunnel, and there was a large group of about fifty goblins assembled.  They all carried little knives, and some of them had pitchforks.  And they looked ready for battle.
They didn’t get much of a chance to say anything to each other before the goblins rushed in and attacked.  
Lucinda thrust her spear forward at some of them to try to keep them at bay. 
Molly swung her giant wooden staff back and forth, knocking goblins back with each swing.
Kevin opted to swing his club like a hammer.  He brought his club up high in the air, and then swung it down to the ground as hard as he could, knocking goblins on the head.
Shawn and Carlyle used their swords as weapons, and battled with the goblins that way.
Catherine never stopped humming.  Her hands were always glowing with power, and whenever a goblin tried to touch her, she reached down and grabbed hold of him, and sent a surge of electricity surging through him, sending the goblin yelping away.
In this way, the group was actually able to hold their own against the goblin attack.  Jack had said that the goblins typically overwhelm their opponents with their numbers.  But whereas fifty goblins might overwhelm one man fairly easily, six can stand a fighting chance against the diminutive warriors.
Slowly, the goblins started to give way.  Slowly, the six of them advanced.
Once they realized the goblins were in a slow retreat, they began to press their advantage forward.  Catherine couldn’t speak, since she had to keep humming, but Carlyle began yelling, “Where is Alfred?  Where is our friend?  What have you done with him?”
The goblins only gave excited squeaking sounds, and high pitched chittering in response.  They jumped up and down, and generally made a lot of noise, but they made no sense.  Clearly they were excited beyond the capability for coherent speech.
“Keep advancing,” Shawn called out.  “Keep fighting.  We’re beating the back slowly.”
But just as Shawn had said that, there was a commotion behind them.  They turned around, and saw a second group of goblins coming from the other direction.  Now they were trapped between two groups--fifty goblins in front of them, fifty goblins behind them.
“Don’t panic,” said Carlyle.  “We can still beat them.  Shawn and I and Molly will fight the goblins behind us.  Catherine, Kevin and Lucinda, you fight the goblins ahead of us.  If we stay organized, we can still fend them off.”
“For how long?” asked Kevin.
Carlyle didn’t answer.
“This was a mistake,” Kevin said nervously.  “We shouldn’t have come into the goblin caves.  There’s nothing but goblins down here.  Even if we can fight our way out from these groups of goblins, there will be just more and more groups of goblins further down the cave.”
“Shut up, Kevin,” Shawn said angrily.  “That kind of talking doesn’t do any of us any good.  Just keep hitting them.”
Catherine, who had still not spoken because she was busy humming, started lashing out at the goblins more furiously.  Her hands began swiping left and right, touching as many goblins as she could and sending charges of electricity into them.
And then, they saw more goblins rushing down to join the fray.  They could see them run down from the far end of the tunnels to help their comrades.
Eventually, they began to get tired.  Molly’s arms ached as she swung the huge staff back and forth.  Kevin’s shoulder was tired from swinging the club.  Lucinda could barely hold on to her spear anymore.  
Eventually, some of the goblins were able to grab onto Lucinda’s spear, and pull it away.  And several of them clung onto Molly’s staff, until she gave up swinging it.  And they also grabbed Kevin’s club.
Carlyle tried very hard to hang onto his father’s sword, but the goblins eventually overwhelmed him, and climbed up all over him, biting his arms and hands with their sharp little teeth.  Eventually he dropped the sword.
“Don’t kill them,” came a sharp little voice from the back.  “King Grinthal wants them alive.”
“But they banged my head with their clubs,” one of the goblins complained.
“You idiot!  They are not yet full grown.  We can use them.  We need more slaves in our mines.  Do not kill them.”
Eventually they all were subdued, and goblins with heavy ropes soon came and climbed over them and tied them up.
Catherine was the last one to be subdued.  Although she had electric power surging through her hands, the goblins overwhelmed her with their numbers. Her power surged through her hands, and the goblins attacked her feet.  She swiped down at them with her hands, and scattered them, but more came in their place.  As quickly as she fought back, they came on.  Soon her legs were tied up with rope, and she was knocked over.  Then the goblins swarmed over her, and tied up the rest of her.
And then they were , all of them, bound

Sunday, September 3, 2023

Chapter 16: Alfred is Missing

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Catherine, she slept soundly all through the night, and she only woke at dawn once the wolves began to stir.  As the wolves stretched and yawned and barked at the rising sun, Catherine also woke up with them.  
“Good morning,” said Branoc.  “You have slept well.”
Catherine rubbed her eyes.  “I did,” she admitted.  
“And it was just as well,” said Branoc.  “For there was no reason for you to be awake.  The night has passed completely without incident.”
“No one attempted to enter the cave?” Catherine asked.
“No one.  None of the robbers tried to attack you.  And none of the other monsters from the mountains approached either.”
“Yes, it sounds like the robbers have been paying them off,” said Catherine.  “That probably explains why they don’t get bothered.  Okay, let me wake Alfred up then, and we’ll see about making some breakfast.”
But when Catherine went to the back of the cave, Alfred was nowhere to be seen.
“Did Alfred already go out?” Catherine asked the ravens.
“Nobody has gone in or out of the caves,” Baldrick replied.  
“Then where did Alfred go?” Catherine asked.
“He should still be back there,” Bettina replied.  “He never left the cave.”
Catherine thought for a moment, while the wolves and ravens watched her.  Then, she said, “Fetch me the king of the robbers.”
Baldrick, Balsamer and Branoc flew off, and a couple of the wolves ran after them.  Bettina was going to join them, but Catherine stopped her.  “Bettina, wait,” Catherine said.  “I have another job for you.  Fly around the mountain quickly. See if you can spot any signs of Alfred anywhere.”  Bettina nodded and flew off.
Catherine went out of the cave into the morning sun.  Then she saw Carlyle coming up the mountain . Shawn, Kevin, Molly and Lucinda were with him. 
Catherine strode down to meet them.  As she approached, Carlyle opened his mouth to voice a greeting, but before he could say anything, Catherine blurted out, “Alfred’s missing.”
Carlyle still had his mouth open.  He paused and stood there awkwardly for a moment, and then he said, “What happened?”
“That’s what I’m trying to figure out,” Catherine answered.  “We went to sleep in the caves.  Then, when I woke up, he was gone.”
“Did the robbers come in and get him?”
“They couldn’t have.  The ravens were keeping watch at the cave entrance all night.  No robbers came in.”
“Then what happened?” asked Shawn.
“I don’t know,” Catherine said.  “But there’s something that the robbers aren’t telling us.  And I’m going to find out what it is.  We need to talk to the robber king.”
Verus, the robber king, was aroused from his sleep by cawing ravens and growling wolves, and he came out to meet Catherine and Carlyle.  He walked out calmly, grinning wickedly.  “Hello my children,” he said.  “And what can I do for you today?”
“What happened to Alfred?” Catherine asked.
The robber king just grinned more.  “And who is Alfred?” he asked.
“The boy who was sleeping in the cave with me,” said Catherine.  “He disappeared in the middle of the night.”
“And what makes you think I had anything to do with it?” asked the robber king.
“I don’t think you’re directly responsible,” said Catherine.  “But you know something about these caves which we don’t.”
“Indeed, I do,” Verus answered.  “I suspect I know many things about these caves which you do not.  For there are things that you never bothered to ask about.”
“We’re asking now,” said Carlyle.
“And we won’t ask you again,” said Catherine.  “Tell us, what happened to Alfred?” 
Catherine starting humming, and her hands glowed with the electric power.  But Verus merely chuckled. “I don’t know for sure,” he said, “but I suspect the goblins took him.  That cave in which you slept is connected to the goblin tunnels.  They have a secret door.”
“Show us where the door is,” said Carlyle.
“I would,” Verus said, “But I actually don’t know where it is myself.  All I know is that there is a door in that cave somewhere.  That’s why we usually don’t sleep in it ourselves.  We leave some of our treasures there, and the goblins take what they want, and in return, they leave us alone.”
“Why did the goblins take Alfred?” Catherine asked.
“I really can’t say,” Verus answered.  “One hears stories sometimes of the goblins abducting children.  Your friend Alfred isn’t quite a child, but he’s not a full grown man yet either.  Perhaps he was young enough to be of interest to the goblins.”
“But what did they want him for?” Catherine persisted.
“No one knows,” Versus said.  “Goblins abduct children.  This is all we know.  If you want to find out what happens to the children after the goblins abduct them, you’d have to ask the goblins.”
“Why didn’t you warn us?” Carlyle demanded.
Verus shrugged.  “We submitted to you yesterday.  I have not raised my hand in violence against you since then.  Isn’t that enough?   We never agreed that I was obliged to help you in any way.  The goblins are not under my control.  I did not command them to take your friend, nor would it have been in my power to forbid them.”
Carlyle moved to take his sword out of his sheath, but Catherine held out her hand to stop him.  “Leave it be, Carlyle,” she said.  “He’s spoken fair enough.”  She turned back to Verus.  “Very well, Robber King,” Catherine said.  “You have not acted as an enemy.  But neither have you acted toward us as a friend.  We will remember this.  If you wish to become our friend, you must do better.”
Verus did not say anything in response, but the smile was slightly fading from his mouth.  Something in Catherine’s tone made him suddenly feel anxious.
“You may go now,” Catherine said to Verus.  Verus bowed his head slightly and left.  The smile had now faded from his face.
“Do you think Alfred is okay?” Carlyle asked Catherine.
Catherine was looking slightly pale.  “I don’t know,” she said.  “We’ve never heard of anyone coming back from the goblins.  Still, we have to try.”
“If we can find the secret door…” Carlyle began.
“...maybe we can go down into the goblin tunnels, and find Alfred,” Catherine finished
“But that’s crazy,” Shawn exclaimed.  “You can’t go down into the goblin caves like that.  The goblins will kill you.”
“We can’t leave Alfred,” Catherine said.
“Alfred risked his life to fight with us,” said Carlyle.  “Even when his father tried to stop him.” As soon as the words were out of his mouth, a new thought struck Carlyle.  “Oh no, his father!  How are we going to tell Alfred’s father about this?  He already wants to kill me.”
“There’s no point in telling him anything now,” Catherine said.  “It would only worry him unnecessarily.  Let’s see if we can get into the goblin caves first.”
“But we don’t know how long that could take us,” said Carlyle.  “And Alfred’s father could come up here at any time demanding to know where Alfred is.”
Bettina the raven flew down from the tree branch, where she had been perched listening to their conversation, and landed on Catherine’s shoulder.  “I was just flying around the mountain, and I can tell you that Alfred’s father won’t be coming here anytime soon,” she said.  “Right now, he’s actually journeying down the mountain.”
This surprised Catherine and Carlyle.  “What is he going down the mountain for?” Carlyle asked.
“I don’t know,” Bettina said.  “I only know what I see..”
“Who is he traveling with?” asked Catherine.
“He is by himself,” Bettina said.
“That doesn’t make any sense,” said Carlyle.  “He knows how dangerous it is to travel down the mountain by himself.  Why would he do it?”
“Do you want me to fly down and ask him?” offered Bettina.
“No,” Catherine said quickly.  “Don’t bother him right now.  We need to try to rescue Alfred before he finds out his son is missing.”
“The first thing we need to do is try to find the secret entrance the goblins use,” said Carlyle.  “Let’s see if we can get some torches to light up the cave.”
“There’s no need,” said Catherine.  “I can provide the light.”
  Catherine started humming, and her hands glowed again with the bright yellow energy.
Carlyle watched this with concern.  It had been a few days now since Catherine had first demonstrated this power.  But Carlyle still did not understand what was going on, and he had not had the opportunity of asking about it before now.  “How are you doing that?” Carlyle asked.  Catherine didn’t answer,  so Carlyle asked again, “How are you doing that?”
Catherine stopped humming.  The yellow electricity faded.  She turned and looked at Carlyle with an annoyed expression.  “I can’t keep it going if I have to answer your stupid questions.  It only works if I keep humming.”
“But how are you doing that?” Carlyle asked for the third time.
“I don’t know,” said Catherine.  “Something is wrong with me.  I don’t know what it is.  That’s all I know.  Now come on, let’s find that entrance.”
With Catherine leading the way, they all went back to the cave.  Catherine illuminated the cave with her humming and her electric lights, while they searched along the cave floor and the cave walls.  The ravens helped as well, flying around the cave and checking everywhere.
It was Molly who found it.  “Over here guys,” she said excitedly.  There was a small crack in the cave wall.  It looked like it might be an entrance to something.  
Kevin and Shawn tried to get their fingers in the cracks and pry it open.  They couldn’t open it.
“There must be lots of tools here among the thieves’ treasures,” Carlyle suggested.  “Go through all the boxes until we find something we can use.”
They found some hammers, chisels and an awl.  They came back to the cave, and tried to pry the door open with the tools.  It still didn’t work.
“Let me try,” said Catherine.
“It’s no good,” said Kevin.  “We all tried.  We can’t get it open.”
Catherine ignored Kevin.  She put her hands on the cave, and concentrated as hard as she could.  She kept the humming going while she did this, and the energy was flowing through her.  But she tried to concentrate it this time.  She felt like she was getting better at directing it.  As the energy flowed out of her, the stone door began to glow red.
“Catherine, how are you doing that?” asked Kevin.
“Don’t talk to her,” said Carlyle.  “It distracts her.  She needs to keep humming.”
The stone wall kept burning bright red, and then it turned white.  “Stand back,” Shawn advised the others.  “Don’t touch it.”
And then, the stone wall began to crack.  And then, it shattered into many small pieces of rock.  And there, before them, was the entrance to the goblin’s tunnels.

Saturday, September 2, 2023

 I posted this over on the main blog.  I should probably post it over here as well just to keep both blogs updated.  This is a fairly good summary of where I've been at with the story the past couple years, and where I'm going from here:

tl;dr I'm going to stop posting my story on this blog, and will only post it on its own blog.

The Long Version
A couple years ago, I made the decision to move my story from its own blog (The Castle in the Magic Forest) over to my main blog here.
I've now decided that this was one of my less inspired decisions, and so I'm going to go back to only posting my story over at its own blog.  At least for now.

When I initially decided to start moving my story over to this blog in 2021, the idea was that I was done fooling around with writing aimlessly, and I was ready to start working seriously on a polished second draft.  
I've now decided to go ahead and start writing that second draft.  And because the whole point of this second draft is that it's supposed to be readable by other people, I'm going to start posting those chapters here on this blog. 
But "second draft" was always a misnomer on my part.  It wasn't the second draft.  It was actually the first draft of the backstory. 
In my original story, the characters of Catherine and Carlyle were 65 years old, and the main story was about their children and grandchildren.  But as I was writing that story, I gradually began to realize that there was a lot of backstory to the older characters, and that it might make the story less confusing if I just went back to the beginning and tried to tell it all chronologically.  So when I decided to go back and write about Catherine and Carlyle when they were 15, I was moving the timeline back 50 years from everything I had written previously, and was essentially creating a whole new story.  
[I know I'm on record as saying prequels are awful--see, for example, HERE and HERE--but I think going back to explore the backstory while you're still writing is different.  Since the narrative is still in the process of being formed, you can, in theory, still smooth out the continuity so that everything fits together.  And in fact there are a lot of great novels in which the author realized somewhere along the line that the backstory was more interesting than the story--War and Peace, for example, or To Kill a Mockingbird.  
I'm not comparing my story to those novels, I'm just trying to establish some precedents for a general principle: writing a prequel to an existing story is a bad idea, but developing the backstory of a work in progress can sometimes be a good idea.]

So anyway, I wasn't polishing up an existing story into a second draft, instead I was writing the first draft of a something new.  But despite this, there was supposed to have been a difference in the writing style.  In the original story, I was literally making it up as I went along.  When I sat down to write my 15 minutes each night, I had no idea what I was going to write, and I just formed the story as I typed.
With the new backstory, though, it was supposed to be different.  I was actually going to plan out the whole thing, and have character arcs and a story structure.  And in that sense, it was supposed to be more presentable than the original story.  
I was inspired by one of Steve Donoghue's videos on writing, in which he said that if you're going to spend the time writing something, you might as well make a story that can be presented to other people.  The original story, because I was making it up as I went along, had a number of plot threads that were set up but not followed through.  But this time, I was going to plot it all out carefully.

At least that was the idea.  But it didn't quite work out that way.  I wanted to plan everything out in minute detail before I started writing the backstory (i.e. chapter by chapter, scene by scene), but I couldn't do it.  I sat down at the computer screen, and I just couldn't visualize the story in that much detail before I started writing it.  I needed to actually write the thing before I had a feeling of how it was going to go.  So I made a rough outline of the intended plot, but rough is all I was able to do.
Also it became apparent as I wrote that I didn't have a clear idea of the pacing.  Things that I initially planned to do in three chapters ended up taking me nine chapters.
On December 18, 2021, I realized my mistake, and switched the name from "the second draft" to "the first draft".  (The original story I then re-christened the "zero draft").
I've decided to do a bit of renaming on my drafts.  I'd been calling the draft I've been posting on this blog a second draft, but I've decided that's not really an accurate description.  It's more of a first draft on the backstory.  All the story in it I'm working through for the first time.
Plus, my so-called "first draft" isn't really a serious draft.  It's more just playing around (what Steve Donoghue refers to in his video as being a Pantsers).  So I've decided to re-name the so-called first draft as the "zero draft".  And the so-called second draft is now the "first draft".
Then, in April of 2023, I went a step further and admitted that this draft wasn't ready for feedback yet, and I probably shouldn't even be posting it.  As I wrote at the time:
The prose and story is all still quite rough at the moment.  When posting the previous chaptersI  - had solicited feedback from the readers of this blog.  But I've now decided that this was premature.  This story is still in its rough draft phase.  It's not ready for feedback yet.  Maybe I might get to the point where I'm ready to ask for feedback, but not yet.  
Arguably I shouldn't even be posting it yet.  (Most writers don't share their work when it's still so rough.)  But having started, I may as well keep going.  But now the purpose of sharing these rough draft chapters is just to let readers of this blog can see what I'm up to rather than to solicit feedback.
But after writing that bit, the quality of my writing has even further deteriorated.   
As I wrote in my notes for Chapter 8:
I wrote a lot of this while sleep deprived.  The basic outline of what I want to happen is there, but the prose is not.  Need to rewrite

And then more recently in my notes for Chapter 15

Yet another chapter that was mostly written when I was sleep deprived.  It needs some serious re-writing at some point to get it readable.
Now, to answer the obvious question: what am I doing writing when I'm sleep deprived instead of just going to bed?
And the answer is, I don't dare miss a day.  If I miss a day, I'll miss 6 months.  I know this from experience.  Oh, I’ll tell myself I’m only missing one day.  I’ll say to myself, “I’m tired tonight, and it’s been a long day.  I’ll just give myself one day off and then I’ll get right back into it tomorrow.”  But then the next day, I’ll say to myself, “Well, I already broke my writing streak by missing one day.  I'll just take another day off as well."  It happens every time--see HERE and HERE for past examples.  
So it doesn't matter how tired I am or how sleep deprived I am--if I haven't written my 10 minutes for the day, I don't let myself go to sleep until I sit down and write it.
But since I'm working 3 jobs and have two young kids, I'm always busy.  And because, like all writers, I procrastinate on my writing and leave it till the last possible minute, I'm always writing it right before bed, when I'm feeling sleepy.  Some days extremely sleepy.  And it's very hard to write anything that makes sense.
[As to the other obvious question--why am I doing this at all given that I obviously find it such hard work--well, I've wrestled with that question before on this blog--HEREHERE and HERE, so I won't go through all that again now. ]

I still believe that crappy first drafts can have some value in a story's evolution.  (The prose may not be salvageable, but you can still get an idea of the pacing, the plot points, potential problems and plot holes, etc.)  So I'm going to keep pressing ahead.  But still, it's not the kind of thing you should be sharing with a lot of people.
If this is going to be just a crappy first draft that I write while mostly sleep deprived, and that is going to be mostly unreadable, then there's no need to post it here on the main blog.  I'll just keep working on it over at the other blog instead. 
I'm not hiding it completely.  If you want to follow my progress, you can still go to https://thecastleinthemagicforest.blogspot.com/.  But it just doesn't make sense to show this story prominently on my main blog if this is the state it's going to be in.
When I get to the third draft stage (if I ever get to the third draft stage) then I'll start posting the story over here on my main blog again.